martes, 6 de agosto de 2019

The tennis ball


One day Jane was at a museum with her school.She was with her best friend,Max.His father was the museum owner.When they were walking she saw a blue and strange tennis ball in an exhibition,so she take it because she doesn't realised that was an exhibition.Later on Max's dad came to tell us-Had someone seen a blue tennis ball?-.Jane lied saying no.

Max's father got angry and transformed into an alien! Everyone run away.When Jane searched (information in Google) about the tennis ball, she found that it was a ball that fell over the sky.Jane saw that it had button so she pressed it but nothing happened.

Some minutes later she look at the mirror and she saw she had a mask and a blue costume,when she he looks to her, Max's father was there and say"you are the selected,come with me".He took Jane's hand and took her to the space,to a blue planet.

There Jane saw a lot of blue aliens.Is Max an alien?she taught.Max's father told her that she was selected to be the protector of all the Galaxy.Jane accepted,since she doesn't have family and lives in a orphanage she doesn't had anything to worry about.The ball gave the power of flying,laser eyes and to be stronger.

Now if you see a blue light in the sky maybe,is Jane fliyng around the  Galaxy.

The end

1 comentario:

  1. Lucía, your story is very nice, but you published it very late. Your mark stays the same.
    Check tenses:
    When you wrote: "she take it because she doesn't realised" it should say "she TOOK it because she DIDN'T REALISE"
    For direct speech, we use inverted commas. For example: "I like this," she said.
    Mark: 8 (eight)

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